I will provide an overall impression of your story.
This includes feedback on
Please include a brief cover letter in the body of your manuscript noting specific issues you would like me to focus on.
Submit only ONE picture book manuscript per paid consultation and no more than 1000 words or 1,200 for non-fiction.
For non-fiction pieces, I will only critique storytelling.
Fact checking back matter/source material is the sole responsibility of the writer.
You will receive a written summary and your manuscript with comments in Microsoft Word.
Critiques will be delivered one week from date of submission.
*Please be sure to properly format your manuscript:
This includes feedback on
- character development
- plot/story structure
- pacing
- showing vs telling
- theme/big picture
- and more...
Please include a brief cover letter in the body of your manuscript noting specific issues you would like me to focus on.
Submit only ONE picture book manuscript per paid consultation and no more than 1000 words or 1,200 for non-fiction.
For non-fiction pieces, I will only critique storytelling.
Fact checking back matter/source material is the sole responsibility of the writer.
You will receive a written summary and your manuscript with comments in Microsoft Word.
Critiques will be delivered one week from date of submission.
*Please be sure to properly format your manuscript:
- Name and contact info in the upper left corner of the first page
- Manuscript title centered in the upper middle of the first page
- Text starts half-way down the first page, double spaced
- 1-inch margins all around
- Name, title and page number in the header or footer
- 12 point Courier, Times or Arial type